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[Marina]

К переводу, запощенному Сумеречным

In order to attack the capital of South Osetia, the city of Tskhinvali, Georgian troops needed to pass through several Osetian villages.

Я б все таки написала бы In order to attack the capital of South Osetia, the city of Tskhinvali, Georgian troops had to pass through several Osetian villages.

Need в качестве модального (должен) употребляется только в отрицаниях и в вопросительных, а в смысловом плане это все же больше значение "нуждаться, иметь необходимость"

[Loo]

Stop The War

http://osetian.com/

 

Genocide in Ossetia

http://osgenocide.ru/

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1. Первый пункт перевёл curious, добавив даты и названия документов:

 

 

Мой вариант перевода (с сохранением стилистики автора) выглядит так:

 

1. UN troopers were deployed between Georgia and South Osetia to prevent war. In order to attack Tskhinvali, Georgian troopers first killed the UN peacekeepers. This means, the UN peacekeepers were killed for carrying out their tasks assigned by the UN. This act of Georgia was not against South Osetia nor Russia, it was against the UN and the whole world's community. Georgia has violated UN resolutions on ceasefire.

 

2. After killing UN peacekeepers Georgia attacked Osetians. In order to attack the capital of South Osetia, the city of Tskhinvali, Georgian troops needed to pass through several Osetian villages. Georgian troopers destroyed these villages and murdered people who lived there; they used tanks to destroy houses and shot with machine guns at people who tried to escape: women, children, old people.

 

3. The capital of South Osetia, the city of Tskhinvali, was attacked by Georgia with indiscriminate weapons, i.e. houses of peaceful people were bombed with heavy bombs, missiles, shot at with tanks and grenade launchers, and Georgia has in fact razed the city to the ground.

 

4. As Russia discovered that Georgia:

- killed UN peacekeepers;

- violated the UN Regulation on ceasefire;

- destroyed several Osetian villages and murdered people who lived there;

- started destroying the city of Tskhinvali and its people,

it had no other choice but to stop the aggressor and the genocide of Osetians.

 

5. Georgia must bear a strong international responsibility for its crimes, namely:

- killing UN peacekeepers, who fulfilled their duties under international regulation;

- violating UN regulations on ceasefire;

- destroying several Osetian villages and murdering people who lived there (de facto this is a genocide);

- using indiscriminate weapons against civilians of Tskhinvali.

 

 

6. It is necessary to demand economical and political sanctions against Georgia.

 

(редакция с учётом замечаний)

 

http://varenich.livejournal.com/138545.html

 

надо поработать над текстом

[Сумеречный]

http://varenich.livejournal.com/138545.html

 

надо поработать над текстом

 

Не вопрос, оперативность перевода гарантирую.

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Не вопрос, оперативность перевода гарантирую.

Дык корректируйте текст ! И заново выкладывайте , ВРЕМЯ ТЕРЯЕМ !